Metaphors

chris900 · 14-09-2007, 06:00 PM

here is a littel poem i id for my y7 project and i quit like it because it is made from simalys and metophors

as sweet as suger
it is a bird singing it song
colourful like paint
it is the birds plumage
as swift as a seagull
its a dream come true

***Chocky*** · 14-09-2007, 06:04 PM

Very nice Chris.

How did it fair in your project. Who is your head of year?.

chris900 · 14-09-2007, 06:18 PM

preaty well my teacher liked it, for the hole project i got a leavel 4 and my head of year is mr bown

***Chocky*** · 14-09-2007, 06:26 PM

Well done Chris

Keep it up. I always say poetry comes from th heart, whether funny or serious.
I don't know Mr Brown. May do by sight unless he's new in the last 6 years.

chris900 · 14-09-2007, 06:28 PM

mr bown came at the end of last year

**digidark** · 14-09-2007, 06:35 PM

Is the lady good or is the lady good.No other answer other than yes is acceptable

***Chocky*** · 14-09-2007, 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chris900

mr bown came at the end of last year

Oh. I left the school almost 6 years ago so I wouldn't know Mr Brown. I do know one of the teachers there taught at the school I went to called Haverstock in London. Can't think of the teachers name. I think he's a Home Ec
Any way keep up the good work . Think up some wildlife poems.

Thank you Digidark

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chris900 Junior Member Info Location: exmouth Equipment: I use a samsung s830, it has 8.1 million (mega) pixels, 2.7" LCD and a x5 zoom Posts: 23 Join Date: Sep 2007 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	preaty well my teacher liked it, for the hole project i got a leavel 4 and my head of year is mr bown

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